La Canada Unified School District

Grade 5 Writing Rubric

 

Level

Organization & Focus

Mechanics & Structure

Vocabulary & Word Choice

Style

6

Creative and effective response to topic.

Flows smoothly from beginning to end.

Skillful development of ideas supported by relevant details in coherent paragraphs

Essentially free of mistakes in sentence formation, capitalization, punctuation and spelling.

Varied and rich vocabulary

Varied sentences; well- formed

5

Clear focus with insight and exploratory quality.

Flows smoothly from beginning to end.

Logical development of ideas with relevant details in paragraphs.

Generally free of mistakes in sentence formation, capitalization, punctuation and spelling.

Effective vocabulary.

Some varied sentences; well-formed

4

Clear focus but without insight and exploratory quality.

Flows reasonably well from beginning to end.

Some paragraphing. with supporting details

Some mistakes in sentence formation, capitalization, punctuation and spelling.

Suitable vocabulary.

Few varied sentences;

Generally well-formed

3

Some evidence of focus; may wander or be undeveloped.

Difficult to follow; confusing at times.

Little/no paragraphing; ideas may not be fully developed.

Numerous mistakes in sentence formation, capitalization, punctuation and spelling but does not interfere with understanding

Simple vocabulary.

Simple sentences

2

Partially responds to writing assignment.

Lacks focus; brief/disorganized, may list, ramble or repeat.

No paragraphing, fragmented expression of ideas.

Serious mistakes in sentence formation, capitalization, punctuation and spelling.

Simple, limited vocabulary with repetitious word choices.

Simple sentences; some incomplete and/or run-on sentences

1

Does not respond to writing assignment.

No development of ideas.

Mistakes interfere with understanding.

Very limited vocabulary.

Inappropriate use of words.

Numerous incomplete and/or run-on sentences.